Comments of chapter undefined of 100 Ways to Solve a Murder
100 Ways to Solve a Murder
Vanlauredel
Chapter comments21
I didn't like this chapter. If nothing ever happened with them at least have Levi be happy with another girl... Sam is seriously not good for him, I don't like girls who prance about and have *** with random people, I don't like thinking that Levi is gonna end up with a girl who had *** with many guys... it's not the Catholic in me talking, it's just weird... maybe it's the old soul in me talking but I would like Levi to have a pure girl, an innocent one, where her attention would be on Levi when his attention would be on her and not treating him like air just like what Sam did... please don't let Levi take the stalker route, and just let him let go of Sam,.. dear author please,!!! give your readers a break, and get on with it...
LazyOracle:At this point Daniel seems like a better person than Sam and that is saying something. Atleast he understood what he wanted and stood up for himself. Levi should just go full homo at this point đ
Quite disappointed that even after all the torture, Sam hasn't changed. I think that was a good place to change Sam's abhorrent 'hobby'. If author wants to persist with it, why are you writing for a male audience. Don't you think its about time to explore Levi's trauma and by extension change him to be a good person. He has a lot of potential to do so. As he's currently written he's a child, i assume by design it was meant for him to grow up due to some external stimuli. Scumbags are fun to read on small scale, but they get boring real fast. Here's a suggestion; make this the stimuli, grow Levi and Sam apart at the same time grow Levi's character to appreciate his friends (Marco). Sam can use the time to reflect on herself.
I don't know what they call it in the USA, but where I live Levi is being betrayed, it's pretty much the same thing. The plot is not advancing to the action part and the romantic part only exists for Sam, this was the 3rd chance I gave this novel, maybe I can even give it one more, but I sincerely am disappointed reading
