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I'm honestly a little sad in the story its interesting... but I dont like the ethics because he is treating her like a object , controlling her like a little slave , he was the one who literally and figuratively through her out .She is finally at a stage to move on and what does he do HE COMES BACK LIKE SHE SHOULD JUST FORGET ALL THE SHIT SHE WENT THROUGH AND STILL ACT LIKE SHE HIS like wake up honey she's a human being not something that you can hurt and when you feel like it come back and want it to go back to normal .You made a mistake she doesn't want to be with you .Accept that if she has feelings and not is some child .He needs to understand and accept her discions to leave a relationship and not control her.Oh not forgot assulting her and kidnapping. You can still assault and kidnap someone even if they are your spouse . If the person says stop or no, or pushes you away dont continue harder like oh I'm your husband I can..NO!!! Just because your her husband doesn't mean you can control her or force her to do anything. Sorry for the rant it's just I dont think it's right how this is going and what hes doing
i dont know y but I feel the story is very confusing and too cliche and over the too the story skips from here to there without any prior warning just what the hell is this and the writing part should really need much improvement if its like thus in the start people just loose interest in reading this the plot is really good but they r showing too much of emotions at once and it looks too ametuerish