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Comments of chapter undefined of The Half-Blood Prince's Quest{HIATUS/UNDERGOING REWRITE}

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Tbh i lost my interest in the story when he was sorted in the common house for severus inserts. If draco and his possey and hermione can end up in slytherin and gryffindor respectively based on wants, then he should have been sorted in ravenclaw. So the excuse given by the hat is simply lame all round.

Apostle_T
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Apostle_T:that's a dumb excuse to drop a fic. I see far too many Ravenclaw than Slytherin. It's true that Slytherin was overrated in the last but nowadays I only see Ravenclaw sortings. The most underrated house is Hufflepuff... And MC is not a guy who only pursues knowledge. He is greedy and selfish. If he was sorted into Ravenclaw... people would have called it BS. Author explained it quite well as well mate. your excuse is kinda lame.

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Mikkoticus
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Nice chapter, for the love interest could it be Narcissa?

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ToothlessS
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Lily... I am not sure about her. 'Snape' loved her... but does your MC feel the same way? IDK man... Never been a Lily fan. I would like to see mah boii Snape happy. So as long as you feel that he will be happy with that WAMAN... Go with her!

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xdestruct0x
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que respete el pensamiento del snape original con Lily o que forme un harem

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RamenGuy
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Great chapter

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Kurupt
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Great job the dialogue was good to me and your doing a great job with story. With romance the guy is like 10 or 12 right that can wait a bit and for the love interest I think Narcissa would be good.👍👍👍

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Daoist987609
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Amazing keep it

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Hollysummoapocaly
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Tie Serverus's long hair into a high ponytail

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TurtleManiacc
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Thanks for the chapter!

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Menma0816
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Tnx for the chap

Ali_Mohamed_9322
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How about no romance?

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AnoMoLoUS
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Thanks for the chapter[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

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Chroniclemale
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Author, I noticed that both your novels lean heavily on the side any reason so

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Gregar
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Would be nice to see no romance but readers will not accept that silently so I guess Lily. Since she's currently very reliant on him it makes writing an 'ok' romance easier, would recommend to do it quite a bit later though. Narcissa ehh think I will pass. And Pandora please no unless she's alot different from Luna in terms of floatiness. I can almost imagine the sweet, bubbly, cringy interactions between the two which will disrupt the atmosphere in the novel(might just be me having bad experiences in other fanfic with romance). I'd rather see you write about him fondling Hagrids hairy sweaty ballsack instead. Anyways still enjoying it until next time.

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Kul
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Thank you for the chapter Author I really appreciate you writing this!

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Siderakos
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So adromeda is 2nd year and bellatrix is 4th year

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OceanoAzul
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The romantic couple should be someone from the black family or another purebred since he has a thirst for power I think it would be interesting for him to be a death eater but he manipulates everyone to achieve his goal, I think it would be interesting to also let Lilian and James be together .

darkcat
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thanks for the chapter

_2MUCH4ME_
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i would say Narcissa

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Crismonsurfer
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Thanks for the chapter man , and thx for not dropping this ? Is your other fan fic dropped tho ?