Reviews of Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]
Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]
Wise_Snail
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I WAS ENJOYING IT SO MUCH EVEN THOUGH SOME WERE NOT SO DETAILED UNTIL THE AUTHOR JUST DROO THE BOMB ABOUT HIM MAKING CLONES TO COURT THE GIRLS THAT HE COULDN'T GET CAUSE HE PROMISED TO ONLY GET TWO. ITS PRETTY STUPID FOR IT AND IT RUINED EVERYTHING NOW IM DROPPING IT BYE
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Overall I like the fic some parts feel forced like the beginning and in the end with the sage emperor, the ending feels like a massive cliffhanger and could have been done better like there could have been a time skip to show what his family is doing after so many years. Overall I really like the fic and this is my first review on some ones work so take it with that in mind. I can't wait for the next fic!!.
It kinda irked me how naive and almost cartoony feeling the MC gives revealing secrets left and right giving cultivation techniques to people like delivering candy i mean obviously he didn't go through any life and death squabbles and never had any arrogant young masters looking to erase his existence because he courted death by existing in the vicinity of king kong clan also the romance feels a bit forced and the characters don't carry any weight to their words like "yeah i conquered the world" a word like this should be domineering and give the reader a reality check on how far our MC has came after arduous journey but there is nothing
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So far I have really enjoyed this story. Your version of TDG is one of the better ones that I have read to date. Keep up the good work and I am really looking forward to the future of this story. If you had a, p a t r e o n ,account I would donate as I only donate to the stories that I really like, thank you and good luck and I really hope you never drop this fanfic.
I Like this ff, it is one of the best TDG ones I've read. It's well written and considers some effects of the MC's actions on the story. However in my opinion, so far Nie Li's agency seems to have been stripped from him and everything goes a bit easy for our MC. Also, he really moves fast with the girls, like super speed. Overall I think its worth reading.
