Comments of chapter undefined of Serendipity - A wink from the fate

Woah the way you write your descriptions is just amazing and your grammar is so good.

Very well written. I thought i was watching a movie. Keep it up. The plot is somewhat a hollywood movie in a great way. Great start!

I am amazed as to how good you described the setting of the story, and how good your grammar is. Great work! Keep going!

Yeah I've been to an arcade game place before. It was fun. Cool chapter!

Great start! I like how you started with her bing in a game, cool idea!

A great start! I'm honestly impressed as I found no grammatical errors at all, a first when reading a prologue! Not to mention, your choice of words when describing the events are so vivid, I can imagine it clearly Well done, author!

Interesting plot, love the way you detail everything : )

Wow! So much action and scenery for a PC game!! Great first chapter!

This chapter really reminds me of A Slight Smile is Very Alluring! Great work!

Interesting chapter...let me read the next chapter!

The way you give details about everything is amazing 💞

Oh the description of fight is so real and detailed that one could even picturized it... Great job author 👌

first chapter is so captivating ❤️❤️❤️❤️ but now I will go for your first book then come back to this one😊😊😊 I must say this story is incredibly awesome ❤️❤️❤️

The plot is present, the text block is written in poetic language. It's like watching an anime.