Comments of chapter undefined of The Wolf in sheep's clothing

I just binge read this whole book and I have got to say that while it has an interesting premise you have to many story lines that are not explored and then thrown all together. This seems like a very interesting world but I think you really need to flesh out each (for sake of ease) species and their world and then bring them together, the lions the elemental lions, the serpents, the celestials, and the “human” realms were not connected or merged in a way that was easily digestible. At some points you let us as readers know when the POV was changing but towards the end of the book you just put it in the chapter title which was confusing. I think this story is very promising! While I personally don’t totally love the way it was written I love the story so far but I wish it we got more of Gaui’s Harem!!! ☺️☺️☺️ I am no editor but I listed some suggestions I thought might be helpful! (Please know I write this as a fan and hope for continuation of this story and not as someone who is trying to put you down!) I think it would be really really helpful if you had a character list with all the main and side characters with their basic information. So readers can reference it when reading the book and when coming across a character that has only been minorly mentioned or mentioned only my their familial connections prior. Also family tree and a “map” of their universe the story takes place in would be super helpful for reader comprehension. I think if you are going to edit the book I would recommend adding a heading to each chapter with the person whose POV the chapter is in and their location as it will help readers understand the time and location changes!