Comments of chapter undefined of It is Our Destiny
It is Our Destiny
raima_alam
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I've read through till Chapter 7, and like Drapetomaniac12, I have to point out that there are several spacing issues. It's not only between (,) (.) ("), but literally after every sentence. The best solution to this, and the one I've always used, is to use Grammarly. Google search it, download the extension, and just run it once and I guarantee you, it'll catch all your mistakes (some though you don't wanna fix, like dialogues: the thing is way too formal) and show you how to fix them
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