I like the fic, but I would have liked it more if I wasn't so humor-inclined, it's certainly interesting, there aren't many fic where they start that far back in time, I've only seen 2, another thing is that it's basically a narrative, It's interesting, but it leaves me wondering what it will be when you want to start the dialogues between characters, anyway, I think you should seek help to write this fic, with your ideas and perspective, but with someone who can write, but it's just an opinion based in wanting to see this more developed fic, thanks for your current work too, I like it anyway.
