Yolohy
Dear author, it might be a good idea to mark inner monologues differently from thoughts spoken out loud, it gets confusing when you mark them all with " " Aside from that, great novel! Almost as great as The CEO's loser wife: Rebirth of the villainous queen of alchemy! I kind of stumbled onto this snake novel while waiting for new chapters for my favorite novel ever (the queen of alchemy one ;) ) and I find I really enjoy your work! I can't wait to read more chapters of both +.+