This gets 5 stars from me immediately just because it’s not a harem so it’s not gonna dissolve into a massive orgy story with no real plot. Keep up the good work
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No matter how much you try to 'change' things, it still always revolved around the main story and chracters. Yeah so what if its just a little different? All DxD story always centers around Rias. The main plot is still the same, nothing really different or stands out.
No-harem en DxD, estás demente, acaso quieres que los universos colapsen?. Pero ve por Rossweisse, ella vale completamente la pena.
A very frequent problem, same as most of the fan-fics. The MC has little to no influence on canon which makes it feel like he is not at all required and like a sidekick.
Very good story I really liked, continue with this top work !! a suggestion for the love interest of mc, Asia, I think it sucks to stay with Issei.
#No Harem. Thank you for even attempting to write a no harem story in that overly lustful ****hole of a universe :P I'll try reading a bit later on ^~^
Really had potential cuz DxD story has no backbone and barely any world building so really could have done something here but alas story still mainly revolve around Rias and her peerage but only 20 chaps so that could change hopefully
This story is great its one of the only story's where the grammar isnt ****ed up. The main character isnt rushing to make a harem and and the characters actually have personality
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DXD and not a harem. Immediate 5 stars. Writing quality and plot development both 5 stars. Its an interesting story and I hope that it is written to completion.
Haven't started reading it yet, but just having a no harem dxd fanfic is deserving of 5 stars in my opinion. I always thought that dxd has some pretty interesting world building to it that is left rather blank because it's an echi harem novel.
I was a little skeptical at first, but after catching up on the story I have no complaints. Good writing, good narrative, good character representation and acceptable OC. Overall a great story.
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