MITCHIEWilliams
Wow!! It's a great story! I would definitely recommend this story to read. The storyline and characters are good, plot is interesting. By reading you can understand the character's background story, it reveals little by little. There are a few punctuation mistakes but it's normal, it can happen when typing. Nevertheless the story is worth reading, the story flow can keep you hooked up! I loved it π My personal favourite is that this story has a mysterious thrill with the romantic flavour β€οΈ
Honest review. This has a good plot but there are still writing mistakes. -Grammar, though grammar mistakes and typos are common mistakes in any book, always reread your chapter before posting. -Punctuation marks, these are what gives drama to reading. It would give the readers a better view of how the sentences are said by the characters, thus making them understand the feelings more. Learn when to use question marks, periods, exclamation points and commas. -Capital letter, always start a sentence with Capital letters so as to refrain readers from reading straight and toneless. I hope you continue this and not drop it. I enjoyed it.[img=recommend]
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