Honest review.
This has a good plot but there are still writing mistakes.
-Grammar, though grammar mistakes and typos are common mistakes in any book, always reread your chapter before posting.
-Punctuation marks, these are what gives drama to reading. It would give the readers a better view of how the sentences are said by the characters, thus making them understand the feelings more. Learn when to use question marks, periods, exclamation points and commas.
-Capital letter, always start a sentence with Capital letters so as to refrain readers from reading straight and toneless.
I hope you continue this and not drop it. I enjoyed it.[img=recommend]
