MITCHIEWilliams
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Shortening the chapTers will help you .. i dont know wt to say .. the story line Is good but bt chapter is lengthy making it boring
up, tiring to read this novel. needs editing
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I know that new writers get grammar mistakes often. Try rereading your chapter before posting them, it will lessen the mistakes.
