Lucian_Valroy
The writing style improves from every new chapter. Not your usual tea of reincarnation or brought back to life plot. I liked it how the author showed Damian's other side asides from being just a killer. I liked it how the author made Damian also have fear despite the fact that he is a killer. The plot is good and the synopsis is well written. If you're looking for a sign if you should read this, then here it is!
Mate, I don't know about you. But I would be honest. Your synopsis intro part is a good catchphrase that may interest people but not here. It's a good eye catcher for books front page. But in webnovel or rather my own personal opinion, you should write down a bit of snip and snap shot of your stories in order to lure people. Like telling people that is this some kind of fanfic, original, what's it about, a bit of intro into your story world kind of stuff that you usually see in other stories intro. But this is my own two cent opinion though, feel free to deny or even deleted the review..
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