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Comments of chapter undefined of Walker Of The Worlds

mozza_mello
mozza_melloLv3mozza_mello

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

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Codel
CodelLv14Codel

he did tell them he wasn't strong enough. I consider this more on the team than him.

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Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10Readtilltheybleed

Hhhhgh, I don’t care for stories set up in this way. Readers are directed to think along a specific path as we bare witness to the obviously unfair treatment of MC. The problem is the lacking logic behind the actions of those involved... if they were purposely sabotaging the MC it would at least make sense, though it would be extremely stupid... We can all see the mistakes and we know who’s to blame. This isn’t because we are geniuses or we were privy to the semi omniscient perspective of the reader... it’s because the fault is made obvious. The uncle is greedy, sure, but his idiocy, that is something truly special. I know that fools can be blinded by greed, but risking +-1000g, the equivalent of around 80years of wages for the average worker? And for what, a small bonus that they may not even receive... Let’s pretend that this moron is truly that dumb, how is he a leader? Now let’s take a step back from that fool. Those above him are unaware and unable to figure out how such an accident had come to pass? I’m reminded of a few comedies I watched in the past... like three stooges and idiocracy. The function of those shows is to cause people to laugh at the idiotic antics of the characters. The ones controlling such a large operation couldn’t possibly be that dumb, right? Rather than investigating the cause and trying to prevent a future occurrence by eliminating the real problematic issues they sweep it away as fast as possible as if to hide their own negligence and responsibility over the crime. I’m not saying that they wouldn’t use MC as a scapegoat to cover their liability for a lack of supervision or something but the way the author portrayed things? I find the justification for the cruel treatment of the MC to be weak and forced to follow the rules of the plot. I just don’t feel like it’s believable. 🤦🏻

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ShibaTatsuya786
ShibaTatsuya786Lv11ShibaTatsuya786

Tbh I think the supervisor overreacted. If he treats his workers this way, he's never ever going be able to het a one up on his competitors though I get why you made him like that. Also the caps were a bit annoying, that's just personal to me

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Krispyclean
KrispycleanLv14Krispyclean

Even though it is the authors first time writing, its better than several ones I've read. The writing isn't fancy, but does show the author has a sense of how to do this. Overall, I think imma like this series. 😁

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smylie
smylieLv15smylie

Get ready for an amazing story!!!! This is one of the best!! Lin Mu ROCKS!!

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Localu
LocaluLv12Localu

I love how people forget that exploitation of workers is a real thing that happens in the real world as well

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Darksky
DarkskyLv13Darksky

This is definitely one of the nicest written first chapter I'ever read...

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Wanderingimmortal
WanderingimmortalLv11Wanderingimmortal

If am the mc i will crippled(amputate) the hands and arms of that group leader and the others in the group repeating the process 100x using a potion for the limbs amputation after i become core formation in the the future, seeing them suffering from my torture then will i be satisfied 🙃(on this story)

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DeZun
DeZunLv14DeZun

Already a first chapter and I'm already immersed already. This is so rare for a novel and this signifies that this is worth reading.

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FastSnail
FastSnailLv1FastSnail

Cultivation novel checklist apparently: 1. Mc is crippled or went through trauma/something bad happened. (The sadder the better apparently..) [check, sick mother, and lost land.] 2.Some Overpowered cheat. [Not yet confirmed]

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Luruca
LurucaLv2Luruca

With all the apple orchards and the obvious oppression, this place reminds me of District 11 in the Hunger Games.

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pyesone
pyesoneLv6pyesone

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ReaderAddict
ReaderAddictLv15ReaderAddict

Hmmmm. So far so good, the story plot still building up. Let's read more chapters.

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NotOnTheApp
NotOnTheAppLv3NotOnTheApp

Sounds Like Lin Wu

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NotOnTheApp
NotOnTheAppLv3NotOnTheApp

After Catching Up With Worm Sovereign I Almost Laughed At Their Cultivation Bases

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William_Litsch
William_LitschLv11William_Litsch

the supervisor did overreact, but it's also clear that the MC wasn't taking his job very seriously. I grew up doing manual labor. if you go slow the wheelbarrow won't tip. 70% manager docked 20% MC, 10% other peasants who let the manager abuse the kid.

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Kell77
Kell77Lv13Kell77

Well this whole place is a rip off. This is like those poorer countries in Africa harvesting coco for pennies and then resold for a lot of money. And the poor kid he said he wasn't strong enough.

InvicibleGod
InvicibleGodLv6InvicibleGod

this pheasants are so stupid they could steal a 1-2 apples everyday to eat nobody would know if they gather a small group to do that after all there are thousands of apples nobody will notice a few missing and they should not be scared of betrayal if they make everyone steal in the group since they will be in the same pot and if 1 falls the rest of the pot might spill ofc if everyone does that it might become noticeable

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Abah_Ameh_Gabriel
Abah_Ameh_GabrielLv1Abah_Ameh_Gabriel

If you no my problem and you possibly no what I can do, no need to force me to do what I can't do, he was forced to do what he can't do so he gave them his results

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Luk2048
Luk2048Lv11Luk2048

Good start that wasn't a chore to get through, now let's see where it takes us. Thanks for the chapter!