Sally112425
The synopsis and title page are attention-grabbing. Another unique and interesting plotline. The interaction between the characters are fun to read. Overall concept of the story is really intriguing. Still, the same with the previous novel, do be careful of the spaces and punctuations. To sum it up, another good work here, author!
This novel reminds me of a Korean drama entitled "Hotel del Luna", I loved that drama. I like the chemistry between the FL and ML. An interesting novel. But, there's a few grammatical errors; some errors in spaces, punctuations, capitalizations. It's still a good read, don't worry! Editing and proofreading will turn this novel into its very best!! Best of luck, author! Keep up the good work!
Reading the first three chapters made me picture out the scenery (as if I was watching a movie). I love how the story began wholesomely. Tbh, I wasn't really into fantasy novels but yours was the one that astonished me. The synopsis itself was interesting and the theme was also extraordinary. I saved this on my reading list for me to finish.
The story has an interesting premise. The first chapter jumps right into the new queen ascending the 'throne' which forces the current King of the inn to pass on his 'crown' to one of his sons. Until chapter 7, the background is still hidden behind veils for the reader, which keeps me reading forward to find out what really is going on between the King and the Queen and for what reason should they not interact? I personally liked the idea for this novel very much, so kudos for that, it is very intriguing. I have a soft spot for anything that involves spirits and helping them find peace. :) I will also point out now a couple of things that I hope will help the author improve, since the story itself is very interesting and has a lot of potential. Description: The story by itself currently is very fast paced and easy to read, but with a little bit more description of the setting, the characters and the backdrop, the story will be more vivid for the reader and also pull the reader in deeper into the story. Grammar: Grammar itself is good, but the story will benefit from a proofread and a little editing from the author. To sum it up: The story and its premise are good, I believe it is rather unique and I'm interested in where this story will take us. The story would be perfect if a little more description is added to smooth out the flow between character interactions and scene-changes. Keep writing author, you are doing good! The story is very promising! :)