Comments of chapter undefined of Wizard King
Wizard King
Mark_Ward
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Thanks for the chapter I will not investigate light weapons because the wand is much more versatile, instead I would investigate heavy weapons, artillery, mortars, anti-personnel mines, heavy machine guns, as well as efficient protective equipment that can be mass-produced because the closest thing there is is dragon leather and it is scarce sorry for my bad english
Part 2: - This could change, how? , with Harry, the young witches at Hogwarts could notice the beginning and growth of Harry's harem, how he treats his women, and surely they will be part of that, they also know how their fathers treat their mothers, and they don't want to live Thus, in addition to joining him they could escape from marriages arranged by their parents who do not want, the harem would not be frowned upon, since this could have been an ancient tradition of pure blood that hardly anyone uses anymore, and more and more girls would join to Harry's harem, and then their mothers who are in a loveless marriage would follow them, this incidentally would help increase Harry's political and magical power, since he would have many witches to practice his sexual technique, and the main girls of the history would be his wives, while the rest would be his concubines, what king or emperor does not have a huge harem?
Thanks for the chapter live the story. But please don't make so many R-18 back to back, I understand you trying to catch up with Harry's love life and all but this was a bit much. I mean the suspense for the story is killing us. So please let the next dozen or so chapters be about the story though I would not mind updates on Harry's love life cause your lemon scenes are quite exquisite.
Part 1: - I think there is a small mistake, first of all, witches do not need to use makeup since they have magic, and any imperfection could be fixed with this or with a simple ritual, the makeup phrase ran down her face, you could change it for sweat. - I also think it is necessary that you add this to your story, that it would be the one that Harry or Sirius, whoever is Mr. Black (I already forgot who he was, although I think he is still Sirius), be informed by the goblins who are going through the accounts of his family, that there has been a breach of the marriage contract of narcissa, bellatrix, and other sisters that he has, that of narcissa would be for not having given birth to a second heir for the black family (something widely used in several fanfiction and Completely logical), with that, as Mr. Black, I could annul Narcissa's marriage and return as a black, and incidentally take half of the fortune from the Malfoys for breach of contract, the same would be with Bellatrix and the others. - Also, we all know that bellatrix is a crazy bitch, but why did she become like this? We cannot say that she became like this for using many curses considered dark, since she is a black, and in the family they should have a way of not be affected by the side effects of continuously using dark curses, so you could put that bellatrix went that crazy because her family used dark curses on her so that she would marry a man she did not want, thus making the personality of Bellatrix was divided in two, the current Bellatrix would be the personality resulting from the curses, while in the depths of her mind, there would be another Bellatrix that would be the original who protected herself with a powerful mental barrier, so if Harry captured her, I could save her, although this might feel strange to have an ally who was previously a mortal enemy, but it would be as if there had been two identical twins, one turned bad, and the other good no, it would be just as weird. but then harry could have bellatrix in his harem, and most likely she will develop an obsession for harry to be his savior and become a fanatic who would do anything for him, and become his brood mare incidentally that I would surely be delighted. This could also be applied to the other sisters of Sirius who are a little crazy, they weren't really them, and once saved, they would enter the harem and become fanatics and broodmares to replenish the black lineage. -There are also other things that were overlooked, and this would be the witches, They are known to be advanced in some "technological" aspects so to speak, compared to Muggles, but they are not advanced as a society, they have gotten stuck, they give the feeling that they fear progress and change, so as a society In cultural matters they have lagged behind, and with that it is good how they treat witches, as an object that serves to give them offspring, continue their lineage, not all magicians do it, but the vast majority do, this is Could you say that it would be a kind of machismo, patriarchy? (If I'm wrong, correct me), we just need to see how in reality a few decades ago women were treated, this would have dissatisfied the vast majority of witches, since although there are few wizards who treat their witch wives in good In this way, these dissatisfied witches will compare them with their husbands, noticing the difference, and this their daughters will grasp, it is most likely that the vast majority of wizards only have relationships with their witch wives to have offspring, once they have it, already they don't touch their wife, leaving their witch wives to rust over time.
