Mark_Ward
it kinda start to get annoying how at every point he is reminded of that their is no lord of the potter house yet he is like " yeah but I'm only 10 and i cant read so i will wait until i grow up" ... really ? every place he visits kinda points out that its time to put down the kiddy glows and start to do some lordship and start to repair everything -_- its at the point I'm starting to get to frustrated to even read
good chapter, but I recommend adding a paragraph or two stating that harry punished them for being reckless and not even asking and just rushing to attack, as they could have killed him, although he could have resurrected as a phoenix, but that's not the case, He should have punished them, like a lynching, or a curse that will cause them to suffer misfortunes for a month, and they could not be removed because otherwise he would notice it, besides that he could put it with the ring, Sirius could teach him why he saw it from his parents. demonstrating in passing his authority, since it is very naive to think that just being the lord of the house they will recognize him as his leader in my opinion.