MishaK
Maya, I get it that you are hurt...HOWEVER, you had better be prepared to be handed your head or words on a silver platter. I hope you realize that whatever you dish out in hopes to destroy someone else, is only going to come back full force on you. Don’t trip as you try to throw mud and look innocent...
author please arrange your thoughts . the story had good start but then things become messy . he actually wanted to take her to his house to be in the same place with maya in the begining ,are you kidding me!!! then asked her to go to the party (i still do not know for what reason) but she refused (the logical thing ) then saying she will go to the party but he stopping her this time . someone please explain !!! . then their sex , why is he acting like pervet and dawn acting like whore (she is supposed virgin dude) . them leaving the lipstick on his face and going to public space , he is a grown man in his thirties not a teenager dating for the first time. he is a smart capable business man not someone who is brain damaged