Comments of chapter undefined of Gantz: live or die

Keep up the good work author!👍

Do you like update the chapter per week, month or a year. Because I just want to know????

Gracias por el capítulo. Me reí mucho con lo de Kurono apretando los senos de Rias

Also, keep on going with the chapter. You are doing great 👍 but some sentences do need to be fix like when you write down like the MC called a girl he/him/his or you called you own self a her/she. So try to fix that but I like your story. 👍👍

Oh if you read the gantz manga or not but in some part at the end of the gantz manga when Kei kurono and his teammates won the Aliens war or survival game is that when they teleport to a white room and meet a being that call it self god or that is the control of the gantz world. But the being that call it self god is just a god system( sorry for spoiled ) not a real god but just a system that help the gantz world balance or imbalance. So, this is you story but I very like if you kill the system god or just system because I don’t what to call it anymore.

As always, I'll be correcting it from tomorrow

Uff ... I was finally able to finish this chapter. It is the first meeting between the MC and the protagonists, the idea is for Kurono to defeat them and Raynare. That is my idea. Any advice comment

Thanks for the chapter

Okay 👍 then keep it up on your next chapter that you writing.