Soul_Caliber
Author, when you read the comments, make sure to not be shocked that there aren't any constructive criticisms. I know some authors like hearing the thoughts of their readers every chapter but in your case, the chapter really doesn't garner that much criticisms because its just, not really perfect per se because there is no such thing as being perfect, but the hype of every chapter, the smooth flow of the story and the really interesting interaction between the characters which you can clearly identify as "not forced" not like some other novels is just right. Even if there's a flaw in there somewhere we can hardly notice it because the story just keep sucking us in. I hope you can give us more though [img=recommend] Thank you!