Comments of chapter undefined of Soul Land 3: Legend of the Jade Emperor

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Honestly, if people are gonna write about op mc, it’s mostly about adventure and relationships, not the actual plot and stuff, just the carefree life

I'll just leave this in my library.... I hope a miracle...

Author, you forgetting something. It is because of Mc being Overpowered that several of scenes and character interactions felt so good. (In first 80 chapters) You just ran out of ideas to write a Overpowered Mc's story. I think you could have ended this fanfic by 100 chapters.

I’d like to add that I did the romance a bit too early. While I do feel that romance was a strong point in my story, after Huang Yu and Gu Yue confessed, there was nothing more to go off of unless I did drama(i.e them fighting then splitting for awhile). In all honesty, romance should have been at the end of the story unless it was a harem. That was a mistake that I did as well.

For me , the romance was ok because I don't like it where romance only happen at the end of the story or confessed to each other only at the end..But this is sad😔

well sad about u stopping, but thanks for writing a great story

noooo

well you can completely make huang you go to another world (ofc to get more waifus *ahem* ophis *ahem) well ofc others would'nt like that xD

While I'm sad to see this story go, it's better than you forcefully putting out something you don't even believe is good.

It's alright mate. It was a fabulous ride and I really can't even fathom regretting it. The fact, that you actually tried again after loosing your motivation shows how devoted to your reader base you are and that's something I respect even more than your talent. I also appreciate the fact, that you didn't just drop but communicated your reasons and the faults you observed in your own story. This shows that you are actively trying to better yourself, which makes me really excited for your future projects! Don't burn yourself out and keep having fun while writing!

... well guess i'll go cry myself to sleep

OP MC is Li Qiye in the novel Emperor's Domination, and it has 4,5K chaps. If you want to know how you can construct ur op mc with skills and some more, thats your novel. Anyway thanks for the FF. :D

Its been a long time my dear Author How are you? I hope you have health and happy live I Just reread this ff and i want to say that i really miss this ff, well mostly i miss Huang Yu and Gu Yue romance 😅

Basically, as long as you dont focus on the op-ness of the mc, it is not a problem. Dont focus on the fighting aspect. Focus more on others. And so on. So many ways to do this.

Author, op characters should have their OP abilities as secondary priority. As a tool, not as his defining character trait. Huang yu kinda doesnt have much besides his powers. No hobbies, no other interactions, too logical and so on... It is the overall story/plot design that ruined it, NEVER think that op characters are not fun to read and write. There are plenty that succeeded. Thanls for the entire story! It been alot of fun.

Thank you.. I've been looking for FF SL3 for a long time with a story like this, mc OP and no harem and of course mc's lover is Gu yue, I was very sad when I found out his fate in the original story so I tried to escape from reality by reading FF SL3 which makes Gu Yue the MC's lover and makes her happy... well the story itself isn't complete but it's good enough because I just want to see Gu Yue happy.. (I know that Gu Yuena is still alive in SL4)

I think you can just rewrite this to something like slice of life adventure fanfic with little to no plots because I think its better for OP mc like this so yeah I'll just leave this in my library hopefully something like a miracle happen and yeah good luck for your other fanfic