Richard_Omega
I really like your story so far and think that the plot is a really cool concept. The 2 things I want to point out is there a a little bit of spelling errors and in the beginning, I got a little confused. Maybe edit the first chapter longer and go into for depth with what is going on. ~~~~ Anyways, keep up the good work!
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