One of the good fan fiction, I like it that this one not too dark, but not too light(?) Is that the right word? Well I don't like the original naruto because he's stupid so this story get a plus
Greaz story best fanfic, i love it, you love it, im no professional,.,,..,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,,..,.,......,..,.,.............,,..,.,.,.,..,.,..,., ,.,.,.,., , ,. .....,..........,..,..,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,,..,.,.,.. *.. *.,.,. *..,.,.,..,,..,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,. *.. *.., /,.,., /,., //*,!,!,! *! *!,!!,!,!!,,. /,.,?,!,!,!,?
well this fanfic may not be the most innovative of the bunch, but a good fanfic does not always need to rewrite everything to work well. although story related i feel the mc may become too op , but its naruto so opยดness is actually expected, the author seems to have it handled for now.
So far the story has gone really great and yeah that's it i hate doing reviews but what i hate more is when some people give 1 star reviews for stupid reasons or for flaws in a story that doesn't even exist so here i am giving a 5 star rating and talking to much for 140 characters.
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Dios este fanfic es verdaderamente excelente ๐๐๐ป๐๐ป la gramรกtica la traducciรณn y la narraciรณn son espectaculares demasiado fluido ๐ค๐ป el desarrollo de la historia es fantรกstica y se siente natural, el desarrollo del carรกcter de los personajes es natural en especial el de Naruto que en este caso es mรกs realista y satisfactorio propio de un verdadero MC; Personalmente me hubiera gustado que siguiera la historia ya que tiene potencial para mรกs, aรบn asรญ muchas gracias por esta obra maestra ๐๐ป recomendado 100%
when will a Naruto fanfiction have anyone else besides Hinata as his wife? it made no sense in the original and yet people still force it in their fanfiction only cause "canon" and it also feels forced and just bad in fanfics๐
Awesome, I couldn't believe it. Naruto became a God, except that he was kicked around in the original timeline.
its a good fic... there could be more world hopping adventures though
One of the best fanfic. The character develpment was good and I am happy that writer brought tsunadexjiriya . Overall everything was good....................
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One of the first naruto ffs I read. Very good book, I can only recommend!:) book has also good grammar. **** 140 words condition for review.
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I am not gonna write a long review so all I will say is that this is a really good ff, and is easily in my top 5 fav naruto fics that I have read so far.
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This novel deserve better support from the reader. Personally, i really like this novel for the solid story. Author, you are AWESOME. Hope u will publish another story.
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