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The rise of the saviour

Author: niharikabhol
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Kamna_Sinha
Kamna_SinhaLv2

Back with another new novel, the author has successfully tried to expand her horizon. The story has so much blended in it that your grip on emotions and reality leaves you. Simply amazing writing. If I were to trade places with anyone in the world, it would be with someone experiencing this book for the first time. Kudos to the author!

Ifeyinwa_Nkemka
Ifeyinwa_NkemkaLv12

Reveal spoiler

albertjrizki
albertjrizkiLv1

Keep it up the good work, mantain your readers. I always look up for this kind of story.. Always improve next part of the chapters and have faith!

Elyon
ElyonLv15

It's an interesting story. Although the time skip caught me by surprise, I am looking forward on how the author will write the tale of Morpheus. More power to you and your story!

Laluna_Courage
Laluna_CourageLv2

Maybe, you must more update this novel. 5 chapter, 10, 15 NO!!! MASS RELEASE!!! I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY. Sory for capslock, I hope this novel more be great again.

Audy22
Audy22Lv10

OMG!!! Wonderful story!!! I'll give you five stars. Keep updating your story, I will read more and more

Zehell2218
Zehell2218Lv12

The author was making a romance novel before so I was shocked she made fantasy this time! I read a bit and I'm shook....this is really good, really recommended! Hats off for the author 😍

TAI_how_WAN
TAI_how_WANLv1

I have read Niharika's novel before and the story was about love. This time she changed her style and chose saviour as the core spirit. Recommend everyone to read this novel and imagine a different world.

Selvaraj_V
Selvaraj_VLv1

Love the use of words in each chapter. World description could be made bigger which can have multiple storyline playing with each other. There is smooth flow of story across chapter. Commendable effort as a first novel.

dattab
dattabLv10

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LupinLin
LupinLinLv10

The writing quality is really impressive. This book is equally gripping like the previous one. I love the characters already. Hungry for a mass release author. 😍😍😍😍😍😍

adaR
adaRLv1

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adaren06Lv1

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DiperZ
DiperZLv3

Una mierda, Morfeo un niño al que quemaron su pueblo mató al rey que lo había hecho, pero al momento de ser gobernante lo mandaron en el tiempo pero la única que recuerda que pasó es la hermana de Morfeo y el rey y el que mando en el tiempo a Morfeo siguen vivos una mierda

RallonWolfheart
RallonWolfheartLv3

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ken_ringdomstory03
ken_ringdomstory03Lv1

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zd4zaaaLv1

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Daniel_Lehr
Daniel_LehrLv10

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Sorenmageofmareth
SorenmageofmarethLv14

I just could not keep going. This book start okay then slows way the **** down into melodrama. It goes on and on and on. Using twenty chapters to cover what should be five. I mean god. They kill nubeous in the first chapters but after going back one day he's not dead by chapter 25 nor is the system up. Drawing it out made me actively hate the people mmorpheus loves because their deaths were milked milked too hard. It's like Smallville Clark and his oh woe is me. We don't like that. We like Clark talking down jumpers or punching down tyrants.

redkingtfk
redkingtfkLv13

Yeah, you lost me with that ****ty time travel to the future ****. Shame, great world building but ****ty plot/prologue. The first time travel arc was quite well done too. Anyway, good luck to you.