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Reviews of Only For Her

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Only For Her

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  • Writing Quality
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  • Story Development
  • Character Design
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May1st
May1stLv14May1st

Read up to chapter 6 before this review and It's interesting. It was straight to the point, yet having some mysteries circling around it. I'm curious to know what led to the crux of her being labeled a murderer. Grammar need help, but we learn and improve as we write, so it's fine. It neither affect the flow of the story, nor disrupt the enjoyment of it. Looking forward to know how this will turn out. Best of luck, author!

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Chainslock
ChainslockLv4Chainslock

So far, so good. The writing of the descriptions - or lack thereof, kind of tossed me out since I consider attention to details engage the mind to be more engrossed to the story. The pacing is good, but the short paragraphs and the lack of scenes in the chapters made the impression that this would be a short story. The text could use proofreading and some transitional devices as well. Overall, the concept is present as well as plot. My advice is only to add more to enhance reader engagement to the world you have constructed. Best of luck in your writing.

prada_murthy
prada_murthyLv13prada_murthy

This story quite thrilling. The writing quality is good and the updates are stable. Some of the scenes are rushed and there are very few grammatical errors, but that's fine. I wish the chapters were a little longer and more details were added into the scene. Overall, this is a good book. Keep up the good work author.

Munchkin_2
Munchkin_2Lv13Munchkin_2

Teen novel and the synopsis probed me to read the novel. I liked how the author narrated in a simple and beautiful way. The novel and characters are interesting that it keeps us hooked for the next chapter... Good job author! :D

MishaK
MishaKLv13MishaK

The story's pace is good and it develops nicely. Author, you need to update it more often. 1st person POV is difficult but the author is doing a great job. Wishing you best of luck <3

Sun23
Sun23Lv3Sun23

There was some grammar issue. Some of the sentence used, I felt like could be reword differently. As for the flow of the story, I feel like it's a bit fast, especially the emotion written changes in an unrealistic way. I was confused on some part of the story becuase of the twist and turns. But I like the constant indication of love between both sister. As for the characters development, I think it can improve. Mainly, the male characters. Don't just say their handsome or tall maybe describe what made them attractive. In overall, the story have a good plot with real-life issue to which I like. The story might need a few tweak, but I like where this is going. Good luck!

RaSi
RaSiLv2RaSi

The plot of the story is pretty good. This is my first time reading a Korean thriller, but still the story kept me busy. Starting few chapters were a bit different but as the story progresses it becomes more detailed.

ozzybanks
ozzybanksLv2ozzybanks

This novel may be slightly stunted, but it has an eery grace to it. Even when the story progresses fast, it feels calm, while under the surface there is something quite disturbing. It's quite a surreal read, but I find myself savouring each chapter. This might sound odd given the tags, but if you enjoy the feeling of reading psychological horrors, you might enjoy reading this.

ruffatorres
ruffatorresLv13ruffatorres

Great Story! Even though the first few chapters are short the writer followed some of the advice and made the rest of the chapters longer. The story was captivating without any noticeable grammatical errors.

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

The chapters was short but it's okay. The story progresses nicely. It was good enough to make you want some more chapters! By the way author, Please review my book called Lumia: Other World. Happy reviewing!

TokyoAnime_Seven
TokyoAnime_SevenLv10TokyoAnime_Seven

Definitely a 5 star rating. Simple yet vivid narration, intersting plot, no noticable grammatical mistakes, and the best of all awesome character design. All in all a 5 star novel, good work author.

Mirilidan
MirilidanLv3Mirilidan

The initial chapters are much shorter, and I did not understand Chapter 11. But interesting story! The plot will keep me reading and coming back. The Star in the Midnight Rain is definitely worth giving a chance! Good work author

Treasure_hunt
Treasure_huntLv4Treasure_hunt

I am very much into crime and thriller types of stories and I found this amazing work. keep it up, dear author. the story is amazing. you just want to read more and more. keep the good work. all the best for your novel.

Purple_Midnight
Purple_MidnightLv12Purple_Midnight

The writing quality is good at least better than most, the character design can also be considered flawless and the story is developing at a steady pace, it's just that the chapters are too short.

Omo_Comforts
Omo_ComfortsLv3Omo_Comforts

This story is interesting, just finish one chapter and I already like it so far. I like the plot and tone. Keep it up, author. I look forward to more of your work

NotUse
NotUseLv4NotUse

I have read ten chapters so far and this is my review: The writing quality is good, better than other authors here in this website. There are no misspelled terms or vocabularies. The stability of updates is an automatic five stars to me. Character design, it seems that the author has described the characters in a vivid manner to the point I could portray their looks and apparel. The descriptions of the world background is vivid as well. Overall, the story has an intriguing plot. It grabs the reader's attention therefore I will give this novel five stars!

ShiroYuuk1
ShiroYuuk1Lv10ShiroYuuk1

From what I've read so far, the premise is pretty interesting. I haven't read many killer webnovels yet, but I can say that this has a very unique take on it. Although the prose might feel a little rushed at times, the author still manages to reign it back in, carrying the story forward. Though the grammar might be a bit off sometimes, it doesn't take away from the story nor the setting. Speaking of the setting, the locations in this story are...quite realistic, might I say, and it adds to the story. Overall, great work by the author and I wish to see more in the future.

magmabeam
magmabeamLv10magmabeam

I like the story premise and the synopsis brought me here. I felt really curious in what would happen to them. The overall tone is pretty good and the pacing seems good. It's quite short at the beginning but I will keep reading to see more.

Breno_Ranyere
Breno_RanyereLv4Breno_Ranyere

The premise is interesting but the way the story is being told needs a little work. The chapters are a tad too short and only leave space for major developments and not enough room for other small elements to breathe. Also, some of the grammar, while never making it too hard to follow what's going on, can take you out of the flow of the plot. The Idea is really itself is really good thought, just needs a bit more work on how to tell said idea.

lucabear
lucabearLv2lucabear

Just one chapter in, and its pretty interesting so far :) I like the POV and dialogue and tone. Keep it up author, look forward to more of your work :)