Comments of chapter undefined of Closed Beta That Only I Played

The content is a bit interesting, but the style and structure of sentences is killing me. I know the MC is kind of dumb (as per his own words), but it feels like I'm loosing brain cells while reading because of these simplistic descriptions and warped logic. I hope it getts better...

Well wow I already gave up hope that any of the Korean novels will be translated 🙂

Has to be the worst monologue I’ve ever read. Dog run through yard. Dog run fast. Dog so fast I could not understand. I want to be dog.

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Bit of an error going on. In one paragraph, you stated the housemaid enters at 9 pm and that the character was studying at 8:30 pm. 9 paragraphs down, you write that she entered right at 5 pm with the snack and medicine.

The poor kid want to have a little bit of free time, but his parents were always on his back so he had to lie and sneak around. Could be interesting. Starts off kind of slow for my taste.

It's here finally. Gonna use all my power stones on this since I am sure webnovel hardly promotes Korean novels on its own.

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I'm going to be honest. This style of writing is killing me. It is so simple and unadorned it feels like no effort was put in. I wish I could keep going, but boy I just can't get past this style

I wonder is the trasnaltion is a bit stiff, or it becasue of the original writting..?

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Tks Chapt

Yay

lol

what a start but hate the maid she didnt have cat ears on

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