Comments of chapter undefined of ROYAL DRAGON AND PHOENIX TRANSMIGRATE TO EARTH

😎👍 good shīt author

Good story'👍

Bro can you explain how this is wincEst?? They arent related in either lifetimes, IM confused as hell

After reading that (and the previous chapter), I can say that that was a pretty good lemon scene for your first time. The descriptions for their actions and movements are pretty good. The only thing that I can complain on is the dialogue. For example, 3 question marks feels like you're reading a text message or a comment on a social media platform. There's also the part where you drag the words for too long (i.e. "yesssssssss" there's way to many 's'). All in all, that was pretty good.

surprised the step mother didn't come in to see them after all she did poison him to kill him so would think she would check to see if it worked.

Thx

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So far so good

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Thx

That scene was well written I looked forward to future exploits!💕

Nice. Keep it up. Excited to see how the story goes.

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks

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