Comments of chapter undefined of Becoming Legend

This was a stupid start.....trained for years but got his ass handed to him by non mages....what was the point? A life and death struggle against a powerful savage animal would have served as a better plot device

I thought he was fuxking training for six years and is already a hunter for some time. How did he lose to a bunch of thieves?

So many grammatical errors and weird sentence structuring in the first few paragraphs is a really bad first impression to be giving a would be reader. I've had to waste so much time reading too many disappointing novels that never have nearly enough proof reading before publishing their chapters. I'd usually give you more of a chance but looking at the amount of chapters released and the fact that so many mistakes remain, yet its gone premium? No thank you, cannot believe people can charge others for illiterate garbage, it is so infuriating and honestly I am so sick of seeing it.

starting off interesting

Hunting Rabbi... Lol, watch out not get beaned by their Torahs.

Nice

This is pretty cool with the criminal island and stuff. Like the names as well

Ooh~ It's getting interesting, good author 👍

Will there be an editor?

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hmmm

So far so good him losing that fight was forced even if he lacks life and death experience he shouldve survived longer unless your gonna give a reason next chapter like a unknown entity warned them or he got distacted mid attack other than that its forced

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Chapter too long, but it was good

disappointing start

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