Comments of chapter undefined of Life In Another World
Life In Another World
Black_Rabbit_Oz
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Stating one thing then a few paragraphs later stating the exact opposite is getting old. Fast. Keep your details straight! He knew both of them were there, the commander showing up should not have been a surprise or caused, the frankly ridiculous reaction. For all the training he supposedly did and constant pressure he was supposedly under he cracks like a freaking egg shell. If this doesn't get substantially better soon, I'm out. The potential being squandered is painful to read.
Hmm? Though it's been quite a while since I've written this chapter. I've never stated the MC both knew the enemies, the reason for his surprise and astonishment. First, the Shaman can talk fluently using the common tongue of the world he was currently into, without prior knowledge that a 'MONSTER' can speak. Second, the reason why he was shocked to see the Goblin Commander that was hiding 'INSIDE' the shadow was because. He recognized his feature. SMH
