Comments of chapter undefined of Life In Another World
Life In Another World
Black_Rabbit_Oz
Chapter comments15
You need to explain the way things work more. Or not at all. having people talk about a system of magic with no explanation of what any of that means is bad writing. You don't have to hold a tutorial, you can explain it in the course of the story, but you're leaving tons unexplained in any way. Also, isn't this supposed to be a system book? Killing a few ground worms raised him 5 levels, but killing a pack of wolves and this silver wolf did nothing? Your system isn't making any sense, and that's going to lose you readers, it has already as I've seen people say they gave up on it already.
?_? few? since when a mini mountain of a ground worm is few? And IK the story has a tad bit lack of necessary information. And he did level up by killing the silver wolf. Before ranting, make sure you read it right. Else you're only making a groundless debate. BTW don't worry, as you can see I haven't updated for quite a while now, due to the reason I'm currently revising my whole story so that 'THEY' would get the point better not, but it would be pointless if a certain someone was just skim reading.
Did he lvl up killing those wolves in the den? Last time i read, killng those worms had made him an intermediate adventurer stats wise. So i wonder whats the stats cap of the most powerful people in this world compared to MC stat? Compared to Aldin stats to MC stat pre-worm is like ***** to a child right? Lol, this why i hate this kind of power scaling it makes no sense
