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Despite the well written descriptions, it is confusing at the first 2-3 paragraphs because its all vague. Who is Venus talking to? Who is Hal and 'her'? If 'her' is Eli, you should state it earlier. And maybe state where they are?
This is soo~ interesting đ¤ đ
Nice one author
Great start, I got hooked :)
This story is great and interesting this story is promising
i don't understand the start....
nice work author The story seems very promising âşď¸
Hii :)
I didn't understand anything
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What's the meaning of none support content type??
