phantom6_sensei
When I read the synopsis I already knew this book was going to be great and it didnt disappoint me! I have to get it off my chest and say it again but chapter 2 by far is my fav! The writing style is simple but it has that flow to it that makes the readers feel emotional which adds this amazing feel to the story. The plot is also nice and well developed but I felt like at the beginning it was a bit too fast and I wish we wouldve gotten more info. The world building is nicely done, although there arent many chapters out yet but you can still get a feel for it and it draws you in. A novel worth reading and I recommend it to everyone who enjoy a good story with emotional beats!
I have to praise the author since he pulled me into a high fantasy world where the magic system is interesting. It was slow pace at start then later it picked up on the rhythm. I also like the quotes at the beginning of the chapters. There were just minor grammatical errors such as missing periods, and comma were being used instead of period. But thi can be fixed later on. Keep up the good work!
Interesting plotline. The sypnosis and title page are very intriguing. Character design is unique as well. Though there's a few misplaced punctuations and spaces here and there, they're nothing major. The world the author built was so compelling that the reader kept wanting more. A nice work, overall. Keep it up!