Evelina and the Ruby Castle

Great work author... I love the you carry the story line... I am looking for more chapters... Hope you are getting millions views and massive votes ❤️❤️❤️

I'm curious to see what happens next ♡ The plot seems fantastic We definitely need more chapters The description of everything is really good too 👍🏽

Really loving the story. The plot is different from usual novels and the perspective is unique as well. Just this fact alone can make my interest last longer.

I like the plot of the story, which looks quite fascinating, the way the author writes and displayed her work is good as well. Nice work, keep it up.

The scenes are descriptive and the storyline is nice. However, some of the paragraphs are very long, which I suggest to break them down into multiple paragraphs, especially when the story changes scenes or dialogues.

Cool story about a woman diving into a fantasy setting and trying to make the best out of a very strange situation while still trying to get her hands on a handsome guy. The writing needs a little work, there are a lot of paragraphs (during the early chapters at least) that are a bit unbalanced in terms of size. The pacing is a tad slow, maybe due to the chapters feeling a little short in length. But the premise is interesting and the cast of characters are all likable and well-defined. There is some interesting drama going on between trying to save the world and trying to get the hot guy to fall for you. Fun stuff.

The story has got everything, and the author has done a magnificent job here. The author is extremely creative, and the story is written very well. The characters are dynamic and there is always suspense in each chapter keeping me entertained and engaged. As soon as you read the story, you will get immense in it and have a wonderful time reading. Well done!!! there is clearly a lot of effort put into the novel the author deserves the best! Recommended!!!

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An interesting background story. The scenes/places and characters are descriptive enough to visualize it. Grammar is good, needs a little tiny bit of retouch and your novel will be at its best. Best of luck, author! Good job!