The story has an excellent plot, an uncommon one in this website. There are no misspelled words or terms, and the writing is created uniquely. One thing I love about the book is how the author portrays the characters. You can really feel them, and somehow imagine how they look like thanks to the author's vivid descriptions. Quite exciting, this book is and it has a smooth pace so far since I've currently read ten chapters. Character Development, nothing to complain about this category either. As for the stability of updates, I'll just assume that you update everyday haha! Anyways author, you've done a good job and it is obvious to me that you have put a lot of effort into this. Keep up the good work!
As for grammar, I'm bad at it too so I have no right to judge yours. Anyways! Keep writing!