Forgotten - Villain Deku [BNHA/MHA AU]

That's a great mha fanfict with a villain deku,this fanfict have quality and the story is very interesting...............don't drop it author-san....................................................................

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I usually don’t read Villain Deku AUs cause I’m pretty picky with them but this one is like really amazing I was surprised The writing is really good and I like how you started to rewrite the whole series and it’s just really awesome

I love it i try to look for villain midoriya stories a lot snd there usually short or just dropped ao i really like this so keep it up.

I'll give you 5 Stars 🤩 you create a Unique MHA Novel damn it's really good I hope you keep updating and please don't drop this Novel!😘😘💕

A bit weird that when he flashes a 'psychotic smile' nobody seems bothered until the author writes that they finally notice. Like he flashes this same goddamn smile five times a chapter and class 1-A and his teachers never bother reacting to it. Other than that the whole Toga thing seems rushed, but hey it was good enough. The story itself was heading into a cool direction, but hey no updates. Spelling was fine. Overall you could read bits and pieces to see if you like this, I wont deter you.

With volume 2 coming out I realized that I forgot to do a review so here I am. The story so far has been amazing and even though its been sticking to canon it still adds a lot of interesting parts on and at the same time is diverging from canon. As the author already stated the story will become completly original and from what i can see from the story so far it will be amazing. The author doesnt have a lot or any grammatical errors and seems to actually take time to plan out chapters and the story as a whole. Overall this story is amazing and is definitly worth a shot <3 (Sorry if this review felt rushed I was typing on my phone)

Waiting for the second season, this is a good Fanfiction and I like how are represetacted the characters. There're some weird thing, principally with the canon, also some things I thinks with a lack of explanation, for example...What happened with Izuku after his mother death?, I mean is difficult hide the clues when you assasin some one in your own house with a knife, more when you live in a super hero sociecity. How are they allowing that a minor age is living alone? Why the plot is so different that cannon? There are other problems in the plot, but in general I'm satisfied. What I'm most waiting is for the relationship between Toga and Izuku and the change that you have promised for the next seasons. Thanks for the novel.

The idea behind the creation of this story is unique, however the plot has some holes in it. Some of them are also out-of-character. Other than that, this is a good story.

Very interesting take on mha. I love it!! Also as a toga fan I think their relationship is very crucial to the story. If not for her I think deku would have gone mad and kill everyone without a second thought

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I'm Giving you 5 Stars I like how the story Went and there weren't any grammar mistakes and overall I like how everything turned out I can't wait for more chapters so please don't drop this and I like how descriptive the story was and the characters and Thank you🥺💕✨

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I really love this book i think that hte book is pretty good ive just finished Season 2 and think this book is amazing amd is over all a pretty good book keep up The great work

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Awesome stuff! At this point, I only really ask for 1 small thing. Please don't make the end goal like 99% of all Villain Deku stories. What I mean is -> no "bomb" that erases all quirks. It's really overused now. IF YOU MUST, at least do it in some cool way, instead of nuking the entire planet with stuff made from Eri.

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Love this side of midoriya,brings out a whole new perspective. I look forward to further story developments and a possible hook up with my favourite **** villaines.

Only read the first chapter but it already looks great Please add more I highly recommend. A lot darker then expected but I like that **** so MOAR please

yo pls continue this book pls I absolutely love it .........................................................................................