Comments of chapter undefined of Phone App: Portable Armory

I feel this is dumb.. suddenly u got hand over a pistol.. says go kill this criminals who are porbably killer and you are in high school.

Seriously? it's rushed without sequence of time...and what? really? I haven't seen any high schooler going around shooting people without any remorse. This needs polishing

It felt a bit rushed here but the ending is tense😮😮

He had a female childhood friend and thus experience with talking to woman, how can he still be such a coward?

These chapters need massive editing but I heard that after a bit it gets better so imma continue onward

@author MaxwellKHA come back here and edit these starting chapters! Don't be lazy now! Fix your mistakes!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter