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Comments of chapter undefined of The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

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Saltberg
SaltbergLv11Saltberg

Not a big fan of the Name ... you could have chosen some cool crude Goblin name, but no ... so much wasted potential and immersion smh

Gamaeke_Shskdhd
Gamaeke_ShskdhdLv2Gamaeke_Shskdhd

Xp

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Bob_the_zombie
Bob_the_zombieLv14Bob_the_zombie

I'm what's more immersion shattering the artificial lock on his memory about game data even tho he can clearly understand basic concepts like points and advanced concepts like using skills to deal more damage but can't remember other stuff ... Or his name

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ldoronoco
ldoronocoLv14ldoronoco

100exp for cleaning a dungeon; this dungeon is stingy! Thnx

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Snoodle_Booper
Snoodle_BooperLv4Snoodle_Booper

The name is super dumb he used his real name for what he believed to be a new character even though it said he kept his identity a secret...

OSNOF
OSNOFLv2OSNOF

I like how he kept his name. I know he could've easily chosen a bad-ass name, but keeping at least a mere portion of his identity prior to his previous life is a great thing to do! Be Yourself! Frankly speaking, I didn't do this in my new book (Which I'm currently writing -- if you were wondering...it's called New World Archeria.) I gave my character a cool name.

Blazing_1NS4N1TY
Blazing_1NS4N1TYLv15Blazing_1NS4N1TY

His name "ruins the immersion"? More like 1 person bitches for the sake of *****ing, which causes all the followers to follow with needless reiterations of the origional post. It's the 1st chapter. It's the authors book. It's just a name.

Dakratas
DakratasLv13Dakratas

Am I the only one who disturbed because of the grammer. I mean wtf, is the author rolling a dice to determine which tense he is going to use in the next sentence? But let's not talk about mixing tenses at random there are so many mistakes, it hurts my eyes. And the thing is I'm not even a native speaker. Whenever I'm reading stories with similiar grammar I am scared of getting used to it and worsening my english skills

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HeavenlyPillow
HeavenlyPillowLv4HeavenlyPillow

Nice start for this one i already feel that this novel has potential. Waiting for more chaps goodluck :)

Allen_Hardbarger_1951
Allen_Hardbarger_1951Lv2Allen_Hardbarger_1951

Just wait till he runs into Goblin Slayer

Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6Earthshaker34

He doesn't remembee his life outside from the game, but he knows his name? 🤨

TheLaughingJoker
TheLaughingJokerLv5TheLaughingJoker

I like the intelligence memory relation Better than mc remembering everything like eadetic memory

the_Harlequin
the_HarlequinLv12the_Harlequin

Name of the mc=bad Novel = still too early but OK for now

G_Holmen
G_HolmenLv2G_Holmen

Looks pretty good so far

Novelex
NovelexLv14Novelex

Thanks for the chapter

LC_Gatsu
LC_GatsuLv1LC_Gatsu

Not sure if I'm being too picky but the way this is written really took me out of it. The change in tense really puts me off

ShifuShenlong
ShifuShenlongLv6ShifuShenlong

it's goblin time.

Mr_N00B
Mr_N00BLv13Mr_N00B

MurimGodDiety
MurimGodDietyLv1MurimGodDiety

not bad actually, i would read this on my free time

DaoistDS64360
DaoistDS64360Lv14DaoistDS64360

You know what that was a very interesting way to start the book. It is actually a unique start that I have seen in a book.

Hirak_Barua
Hirak_BaruaLv15Hirak_Barua

Hi folks, just started this today, good be a great adventure! 600 chapters to read! I love reading non humans but humanoid, action fantasy! 🙏🙏🙏 So far I like chapter 1. I like how he got his part of memory by upgrading intelligence too.