Doni_Tol
The story is running good and most of all it is new to my taste. However, there are some grammatical error and wrong use of punctuation marks. I am using this app to help me correct my mistakes and this app is called grammarly. It helps you find mistakes in your story and correct it. It is available on mac, windows, android and I think it is also available in ios... If you found it hard to use it you can always rely on youtube.... Good luck in making this novel
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