Comments of chapter undefined of Frankenstein Rituals : Grimm's Rise Again Series Part 1

If I recall correctly, he set up the wards for his home to not allow anyone inside, even other Blacks. Yet a bunch of house elves he has never met before are able to pop in casually. I mean, this isn't surprising really since they did it in the movies too, but it should be a bit of a warning to him to find a way to elf-proof his house.

Your story is kinda going everywhere right now. You might wanna reshape it a little. Your not really following the rules of the world your character is in and your making him grow at an exponential level, one that doesn't even make sense. I like the idea you have, but you might wanna go back to the drawing board for this one. Please continue though.

Aren't dementors supposed to be immortal!?

Your doing the same as in blue devil. Making him to strong to fast and your going to get stuck again. I like your ideas and i hope you have a plan.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thx for chap

Thanks for the chapter

Can the sharks and mo get a human form? Maybe something like a ritual

I like it