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Perfect Incubus System

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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

-an interesting concept, but I just hope he doesn't think completely with his cock, "she is beautiful, she is better with me". if you want to add Yasaka, Grayfia, Venelana, Shuri or Phenex lady, do it with situations where it makes sense, no that because you want it you have to add it to the harem. If you are going to add anyone you mention, give them a story and do not accumulate women like pokemon, first focus on what you have and if you are going to add more, do not leave them lying around, give love to all equally. -It is tedious when the MC flirts with someone, adds her to the haren, has sex and never talks or has a date with her again until the author decides he needs more. sex scene of her. "and to finish" = the character I like to recommend for the haren / faction: Raynare (she is a bit sadistic but she did what she did for love with azazel and also only has a superiority complex easy to eliminate, it could be like your secret operations of black operations, when you know that doing something is not the right thing in public so you do it in secret, and you could have the two that accompany it as a plus) Sona (the woman who moves her lenses xD, she is a great strategist) Tsubaki (bellesa fria) (idk she great, good swordswoman, back in beauty of sona) Aika (in the light novel she became a very good magician, but I do not remember her name, if it is not so t aika, it is that girl with glasses who was a pervert in the issei class) Murayama and katase (those two girls in the class where the trio spied, the ones with swords) Gabriel (could fix the gods system) Grayfia (good warrior maiden and ice mage) Venelana (sexy and probably could be the director of meetings and things at official parties, past noble cause) Serafall (maou, to calm the other factions, and I like their childishness, others might say that it is annoying, but that is what makes it different from others and more accessible) Ingvild leviatan (she can literally control dragons, or she joins you or you kill her, because she could literally control mc if she is strong enough) (Obviously all the MC in this world) Rias (the destructive power is Op if it is well trained, it can be mimamda, but with good "spanking" and training you can have a more pleasant "Rias") Akeno (he is a little nephilim, neither sacred or demonic elements are his weakness, sadica xD) Asia (a healer = many think that it is useless and not necessary, I say that it is the main piece in a combat. Better when it has a dragon as a companion xD) Ravel (Phoenix tears, good secretary) Xenovia (durandal> good swordswoman, just teach her common sense xD) Koneko (nekoshou devil op, they were experimenting with their sister for a reason, only sairaorg was op and I only use touki) Kuroka (same as her sister, only because of the experiments, she is no longer a pure nekomata, good choice for nobility) Kiba (I don't care, any character in dxd who prefers to train technique over power is respectable because training power is easier than perfecting a technique. (In her feminine form she is a beauty xD, if you have seen the illustration of the novel)) issei (I put it too, because it can be good to have him as a subordinate, that if. first I would be to take out the pervert, by his case I make him an obedient butler xD, and of course he yes is a woman much best) Gasper (friend, vampire who can stop time, this law trap needs a gender change) Rossewaise (he is one of the best magicians in valhalla, according to the light novel. Also a good secretary) Leviana reni (I don't know much about her story, because I haven't read the novel, but I do know something, because I read a few paragraphs where they put her as a good magician and that she has a "sacre gear", I don't know if it's true, but It would be good to have her as a wife and part of your nobility) yasaka (strong yokai, I have never seen her put in her nobility by any fanfic who is from xdx, she is also a good ruler, a good wife, among other things) tiamat (dragon of chaos, if you have it in your nobility, you have a powerful dragon) yubellana (from the riser phenex nobility, good magician like akeno hajima, plus the others who are in her riser phenex nobility, have their potential) etc

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IncubusIsLaifu
IncubusIsLaifuAuthorIncubusIsLaifu

Hi guys! Author here! Some people might not like this because they will think that girls are slut and easy-going. Mc is a Royal Incubus so why not taking advantage of it? Also thank you for reading!

DaoisttG3KuY
DaoisttG3KuYLv1DaoisttG3KuY

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Master_Rin
Master_RinLv4Master_Rin

Hello Everyone! I am an admin on the author's discord server, and I am here to inform you that the author's account glitched out and he can't see his books, so he isn't able to update. The author requested that you stop voting for his books since he's gonna rewrite his books on another account. He wanted you to stop voting so he can re-upload his books in another account. For more information join the discord server, IncubusIsLaifu Discord! Link: https://discord.gg/KT3j5SE

Rain_Miko
Rain_MikoLv14Rain_Miko

Hello sensei I'm here give u 5 star, because I see this harem and great fanfic, and u are milf sect to 🀣🀣🀣, so I will standby for new chapter, and get all harem girls don't give issei, and get all milf 🀣🀣, venelana, grayfia, shuri, yasaka, Gabriel, griselda, and other milf 🀣🀣

F0rk
F0rkLv13F0rk

Hey guys! I am adding this on 29-05-2020, author was kicked from his account and lost 7 chapters for this one and a few for emperor of the court. Webnovel just keeps him waiting and isnt helping so he created a new account lightheartedfics check that out. So just to let everyone know this fic is for now hiatus on chapter 99 until author gets access back on his account or till he reuploaded everything

ZaWarudoo
ZaWarudooLv4ZaWarudoo

There is not so much chapters in novel but i think incubus mc is an interesting beginning ( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°) ( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°) ( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°) ( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°) ( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°)( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°)( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°)( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°)( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°)( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°)

vyziq
vyziqLv3vyziq

the book is alright but i give 2 stars because of author pretty much adding a sex slave(miku) to the harem when there are tons of other women especially since he can travel worlds there is seriously no reason for a girl who spreads her legs for anyone thats attractive to be added . maybe author has a thing for easy women

MrsSoledad
MrsSoledadLv3MrsSoledad

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LoliIsWaifu
LoliIsWaifuLv3LoliIsWaifu

New book, New FAP, ahem research... yes! Let the author the story guys! come one. An Incubus is a sex fiend so don't expect developments and instead expect for banging!

Lupuchs
LupuchsLv2Lupuchs

Honestly for a novel thats written for fun i give this a 4* review(but if rated differently it wouldn't be a 4*), i also appreciated the fact this is kinda good for a guy who has a weak heart. Still enjoyed this very much and i hope the Author improves to be a good writer some day.

Culture_Lover
Culture_LoverLv12Culture_Lover

bueno, esto es lo mismo que goddess colletor, hasta el nombre del mc es similar, y el resto es lo mismo que puedes encontrar en otros fanfic, el protagonista siendo el mejor, las mujeres son personajes planos no desarrollados que le abren las piernas al mc, una tΓ­pica historia hentai. al menos cambia algunas cosas de los mundos en los que estΓ‘, dando un poco de "originalidad" , en fin, si vas a leer esto apaga tu cerebro y no le busques lΓ³gica

Dropletcloud
DropletcloudLv5Dropletcloud

Reveal spoiler

Diky_Maulana
Diky_MaulanaLv1Diky_Maulana

Yah ceritanya bagus dan cocok buat para pria lajang yang kesepian dan frustasi secara ,,*eheum β™πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ #$ensor!!!!!!!!!!!!! Intinya ceritanya menarik dan saya harap semakin cepat updated ya author yang terhormat. Tolong bimbing imajinasi kami para pembaca yang tersesat iniπŸ˜‚

_Cooldude_
_Cooldude_Lv6_Cooldude_

Update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update

Chaos_Drag0
Chaos_Drag0Lv3Chaos_Drag0

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Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv4Grenhaer

the main character is worse than a whore, he takes all the girls with a connection in the harem, even if they are whores (whores, unlike him, have no choice, they need money, etc.), it seems that if there is a very strong connection with the guy from whom he will get a lot of points, he will also take him to the harem. he is disgusting.

Wyattwda
WyattwdaLv4Wyattwda

Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

Immortal_Cat
Immortal_CatLv12Immortal_Cat

When do we expect you to be back????πŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’Ž

Psym
PsymLv13Psym

Except the writing everything else is awesome but it's understandable for a first fanfic. So keep up the good work and post new chapters soon please.