MagusTheSupreme
You write either short chapters or incorporate POVs of the clones. One thing to think of is the effect that his domains have on his Realm. What I mean is are the plants and animals going to evolve due to the saturation of his divinities? Since they are all within his realm and saturated with his power does that mean they already classify as his followers? Any other thing to think of is how the developing authorities would affect the realm as they increase in mastery. Maybe itâs just me, but once the Authority of Souls increases could you add an effect where either his collected souls or those of his followers swirl around his magic tower ? Just think it would look really cool to have a cloud or swirling souls to complete the evil sorcerers tower of magic vibe.
The organization of men of letters is more corrupt than you think, in the supernatural universe it is the main cause of the hunt for wizards and witches, I think it is better to create a division that is dedicated to the study of the paranormal and what these do , after having enough information and they begin to train agents to join another division called for example foreign normal, a division that does the same as the organization men of letters, that way they do not need the men of letters