Reviews of Way Of The Darkness
Way Of The Darkness
Chaos_Prime
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Worth to read!!! No harem~ no harem~ no harem~ please support author-sama by power stones^^ ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
This is a eastern fantasy story from a beginner author. That's the short review. And now for the slightly longer one: The story has an interesting premise. It's basically about a male and a female cultivator couple. Both are loners, have an op background and try to reach the apex. Most stories like this choose a only one primary weapon or cultivation path for their protagonist. From my current understanding this won't be the case here, especially considering the race he has chosen. As a new author there are obviously problems that can occur in both writing quality and storytelling. But ChaoticLuck is a person who likes to discuss, is willing to learn and improves after he thought things through. Within the first 20 chapters the improvement were huge. You won't be able to see it anymore since the old chapters got reworked. I'm looking forward to where our journey will lead us.
Meh its quite a good trash novel even though I never read it but will read it later and then I will realize thats its good but will not remove my review such a trash novel and Chaotic if u gonna read this my friend know that I hate you with all my heart even though you helped me creating my novel should I plug my novel in mayv=be its called Requiem Of Pandoras Devil and now I will take my leave. but before the I must stae my affiliations which is. EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT EXP SECT
Let's see, there are interesting aspects in this story that will intrigue you. I can't help but praise the creative world building of the author. As this is quite a fairly new book, it's great to see enthusiasm and energy poured out into this :D A diamond in the rough, a few polishing will make this quite into a shiny gem! *Spoiler* I think Lu Yao is a cute thing, a cold-hearted woman that pairs with Xue Mo quite well.
I have to say, the ideas behind this story and the potential it has are great! Also, I really like the personality of Xue Mo so far. I'm eager to see where this all is going. I have nothing to criticize in regards to the characters, the overall story or the worldbuilding. But of course, I won't only heave on praise without pointing out a few things that could still be improved: Although it has gotten better over time, there are quite a few grammatical mistakes and sometimes, the wrong words are being used when they sound alike (for example "loaner" instead of "loner" - or "less" instead of "lest"). Also, the punctuation still needs a lot of work. Keep in mind, though, all of these are just minor gripes. With experience and getting more familiar with the English language, they'll become less frequent. We all make mistakes like that. There is just one thing I would recommend: Don't let readers influence your story too much. If you think they had a great idea and it'd perfectly fit in with what you had in mind, feel free to use it. But if you let readers decide the direction of your story and give them too much control, it won't be YOUR story anymore. So in a way, be like Xue Mo: Absorb the best and discard the rest, before making it yours and changing it so it fits in with your vision. (Just precautionary advice, in case you ever feel tempted to listen too much to your readers. You're not doing so right now from what I've seen. I just wanted to say this in advance so you can keep it in mind xD)
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