Chaos_Prime
I am going to give you an honest review. A month ago I made a review about myself in it I said: “Shameless Author here I will make this review so people can learn that I might not always upload because I am new to being an author so I might have some bad ideas that I need to extensively review before making a chapter and I might get a writers block and I rated myself how I honestly am so u can check it and see if u want to continue if u want to I will try my hardest to think of ideas and become more consistent in writing in the future so thx for reading.” Was what I said at the time and gave my self 3.5 stars as that is what I deserved at the time and I know it, but I somehow managed to persevere and write 1 chapter everyday and nowadays I am writing 2. And for me who a month ago was a total newb who knows nothing about writing was somehow able to improve so far which is in itself a great feat to accomplish.... Anyway the conclusion I want to arrive at is that I am becoming better and I will keep trying to improve and become even better. Note: As for the first 10 chapters if I haven’t already edited them I will surely edit them and improve them when I have the time so bear with me and let’s continue the journey to find what Darkness truly is.
Enjoying the read. I am not that good at writing reviews so I won't do it, this is more of a support to the author and the novel that I enjoy. I give my support with it and wish for the author to get experience and improve the overall quality of his writing. Only by improving and overseeing ourselves can we progress.
I am new to webnovel and haven’t read many books but among the 20 or so novels that I read this is one of the best the author knows how to take advice and improve and he doesn’t shy from asking for advice's unlike some other novel’s authors that I read so if anyone is reading this can u help the author by giving him spirit stones reviews and comments so he can improve and the novel would be able to get a better ranking and attract more people and will be therefore more known
All I can say about this novel is that it's a unique take to an OP character becoming more OP. The idea is great, and I can see the enthusiasm of the author while reading the chapters. The only thing I would like the author to improve on is his writing quality. Other than that, I'm quite interested to find out where Xue Mo will go :)
4.4 for now.i like the beginning. The grammar is great even from the start at least better than mine. The way you tried to portray the MC in a different way is to my liking. I hope you make the story unique in your own way and not follow the regular cultivation. I will rate the book again later after the story progresses a bit further. All the best
I really like this story. Nice setting, good background, no harem, and even the classic usage of rebirth, but it has my pet peeves in it unfortunately which makes met unable to read it. You repeat so much information. You constantly use a word that has already been confirmed to describe him and I really can't get into that. So I apologise, but I can't read any further until that is fixed. Keep up with the good work on everything else though, it was nice.