M_Lexi
Really good book like fellow Daoist Max said. It's too early to judge because of the lack of chapters but I could say that it's looking promising, I'm waiting for more chapters. The first four chapters were good with good writing style, no apparent grammar mistakes So far, Keep up. You can check my book The Prime and leave your review and some suggestions, I'm working on my grammar so be warned, but don't the story is pretty good.