Comments of chapter undefined of Death system

Great chap especially the first page really really cachy, maybe the mention about the last bit of strength during the fight might need a check, but still amazed 👍👍👍🤔😊

Although it's only first chapter I loved it . I can't wait to read more 😆

aeh amazingly written.

This is a great first chapter, leaves a lot to mystery and shows great fight coreography! The ending also leaves you wanting more, what could possibly be next for our MC here? It's an amazing first chapter, I applaud thee~

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This is already the essence of perfection

nice

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter

♠️💚

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If nobody else has offered, I’d be honored to edit! Or at least help or just make suggestions on what can help... I’m very good with literature!

Epic...

Geez... Already hooked on this book. Can't wait to read the next chapters!

love it

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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon