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Comments of chapter undefined of A Cliché Multiverse story

Darkstar11051999
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I feel bad for the guy, the mc should've healed his eye tbh.

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5PsyLoRD

They don't end together, even in the original novel. At least this way the girl has a chance to be happy. (different from the original that only the guy has a 'good ending')

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YagamiRen
YagamiRenLv14YagamiRen

you should add Miya for a twin Fivesome

KoRSito
KoRSitoLv4KoRSito

Well maybe it's my insatiable love for Milf / Mature and Oneesan but if it was possible to get Rias and Akeno in HS DxD it would be nice P.S; I still don't understand how many hated Rias and loved Sona. If you offer Rias a way out of engagement with Raiser, you could win her over and for Sona you should have a better brain than her and know how to use it.

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decilence
decilenceLv4decilence

Honestly im just thinking , will he seduce the lady Fujibayashi? Because this world looks like it will be cuck galore.

Tempest_Oosuki
Tempest_OosukiLv4Tempest_Oosuki

Please get gabriel and rosswiesse and mayumi saegusa

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JokerMarksmanH7
JokerMarksmanH7Lv5JokerMarksmanH7

thx for the chap pal

Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10Readtilltheybleed

Based on 365 day=year 1☀️Day=1🗓year 2 hours =1 month (around 30.42 days) .46 hours =1 week 3.945 minutes=1 day And he just handed his new GF a communication device, shaped like a ring 💍? I can imagine the headache that could ensue if he returned to HOTD world. 🗣👂🤯 If 4 minutes was crammed with one day’s worth of ‘I just wanted to hear your voice’ and such... a day encompassing a year... if he slept for only 2 hours she would have a month of silence. On the contrary, if he was to spend time with his women in a world where the time was super fast he could have long intimate dates with his girls in what would seem like the blink of an eye to the others... except the goddess, but she can continue to see him in their dreams which means she would probably have the longest time with him.

Yoh3t
Yoh3tLv4Yoh3t

The Hat Green attack

Ayanokoji_Kiyopon
Ayanokoji_KiyoponLv2Ayanokoji_Kiyopon

Author-san we needed more women from this world, it has some great women.

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

HHKing
HHKingLv14HHKing

So many strong beauties in each of these different universes in need of eternal lovin with the MC. I'll keep reading to learn how many women are saved.

dontenglish
dontenglishLv4dontenglish

am i the only one who laughed when maya was asked by her father if shes prepared to become the 11th girlfreind

daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2daniel_rahn

Thx for the chap xd can't wait to see garfya, Will he see her when she is single right?

THEBE
THEBELv3THEBE

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ErjasD
ErjasDLv13ErjasD

xp

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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

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Kazu_Vexed
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F

jeanpierregerardo
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+++++++

ahmed_waleed_1200
ahmed_waleed_1200Lv5ahmed_waleed_1200

Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work like always and can't wait to read your next chapters thanks for your hard work

Raick
RaickLv4Raick

Thanks for the chapter :)