Servant_Ambrosius
I really enjoyed your work but I just can't take the bouncing around of characters worlds timelines and multiverse in the midd of an already great story that didn't conclude it drives me nuts. if it my reading then I'm sorry but danm I'm reading dc then multiverse with azula then morgan then you drop a new one again. too much for me thanks for the read until here good luck
honestly you could just let the MC yoink so many powers from that world, like for example mjolnir. instead of going the whole "only the worthy may wield me" schtick, Ambrosious could just fuse it with his spear/trident and hell to go one step further he could go full MCU and either just suck the power out of it or just straight up fuse with it. Besides that there's things like Spiderman's spider bite, being able to do the things he can without magic could be pretty useful and on top of that he'd get a connection to the web of life which literally drives and contains the marvel multiverse. of course the whole inheritors could be another plot point later on. besides that bro don't beat yourself up too much over the writing cuz I think you're doing great bro
That Marvel jump drawback his good lot of enemies and fights you can fight directly or make them fight among then like the Kree vs hydra while the mc deal with apocalypses and "persuade" Scarlet Witch to "join" him Mjolnir his a good souvenir, also saving the planet of this cluster**** thought fighting can make his war divinity growth but the drawback say that his companions are in the original timeline while he is in the J timeline
I think that would be good. although there are many problems at first, as the avengers at that time were newly formed and have no experience in team combat, they messed up a lot especially the skrull arc where cap was plotted against and others didn't notice his strange behavior, like when he give up hulk to the government to be detained especially to someone who torments and hunting the hulk to the ends of the earth, Ross. The realm cap wouldn't do that and instead will fight for him even if it means going against the whole world as long as he knows that he's innocent like he did to bucky at the civil war. and also I think he should perform the ritual in ygdrassil like the one rune king Thor did, and become a rune king himself with omniscient, and nigh-omnipotent power.
So, basically his family is going to be frozen in time in the normal Earth-8096 while Ambrosius is in the 'J' alternate until he succeeds. Mmmm. Holy Molly Macaroni! I can already see all the conflicts. That world is ripe for the taking for an unaffiliated deity fufufu~ *Orochimaru laughing* If you go with it I'll recommend for our MC to try and take both Mjolnir and the Odin force. After all, he has a connection to Odin after his ritual and knowledge of runes. Perfect for a super power up.
I honestly have 2 opinions, (1) Go to a world for vacation. Example; The Thief Who Roamed The World, The Great Thief, even SAO. Your MC should relax and you as well, so go with something easy. Or (2) Go to a Cultivation world, now I'm not sure if he has restrictions regarding what world he can and cannot travel to but a Cultivation type world would be a breath of fresh air. Example; Emperor's Domination, The Desolate Era, The Ancient Strengthening Technique, shoit even Tales of Demons and Gods(mainly for soul techniques). He can't get techniques that strengthens his body, as well as family. But mostly I want to see what his family can do with Alchemy and Formations. (Really hyped to see what the girls can do and their knowledge of magic incorporated). But no ATG, to many people have written one lol. Those are my opinions, would like to see what the Audience in the comment section has to say.
Honestly that world shouldn't be that hard to do after this dc world, if they succeed in the dc world with these gods than they should be able to handle everyone except perhaps galactus 1v1 and the difficult ones could be taken down by sneak attack and rituals to imprison those that don't deserve death
Please do not go to a cultivation world, I always find them worsening most Jump Chains. The power scale of cultivation worlds usually make no sense and it just takes way to long to go through everything considering most good stories have 2k+ chapters or multiple, multiples worlds/realms. I actually like the Marvel idea alot, it would be uniquely different from all other marvel jumpchains so far, my only dislike for it is that it seems he would be going alone? or did I read that incorrectly.