Reviews of Astral Pet Store
Astral Pet Store
Ancient Xi
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*coughs confidently* This the original by me : I want to be the very best, Like no one ever was. To tame them is my real test, To train them is my cause! (I will travel across the land, Searching far and wide. Each Astral Beast to understand The power that's inside!) Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! It's you and me, I know it's my destiny! Astral Beast!!! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend! Astral Beast!! Gotta tame em' all! (A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through!) You teach me and I'll teach you, Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Every challenge along the way, With courage I will face! I will battle every day, To claim my rightful place! Come with me, the time is right, There's no better team with a system!! Arm in arm, we'll win the fight, It's always been our dream! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! It's you and me, I know it's my destiny! Astral Beast!! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! (A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through!) You teach me and I'll teach you, Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! It's you and me, I know it's my destiny! Astral Beast!!! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend! Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! (A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through!) You teach me and I'll teach you, Astral Beast!!! Gotta tame em' all! Gotta tame em' all! ASTRAL BEAST!!! - BY LORD_OF_ORIGIN
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Let’s be honest, this novel is a unique novel but not the rare one. I like this kind of pet-shop-cultivation-novel but later I had gradually became so disappointed when I read the raw. The tittle novel is “Astral Pet Shop” but this novel hardly mentioned the development of the shop, they didn’t even sell the astral pet but only selling food pet and training customer’s astral pet. That’s all. What’s about the mc? Geeeh, mc is arrogant and a bit madman. Instead how to develop his own shop, mc is rather provoked every big families. He is smart but no wise. He chose to enter the outside secret realm with the risk of one time death when the system already provides him with many secret realms with endless death. The only thing he need is a little bit time, he just need to wait patiently and accumulation of money from shop but he ends up running into the greater risk and provoked some big figures. Seriously, the more i read the more disappointed i became and gradually i lose interest then I drop it. The concept itself was very good and unique but author made this novel to became so cliche. The side characters were even more worst then the mc’s. Overall rate: 5/10
Brain Dead Mc to protect plot Check Stupid Coincidences to protect plot Check Plot Armor Check To protect the stupidly designed plot, the author makes MC takes the most stupid decisions. It is one of the worst Chinese Web novels I have ever read. The "Original" structure is somehow interesting, other than that it is rubbish. I read 600 some chapters and I regret terribly. Author forgots what had he wrote in one chapter before, no flow, no cohesion. Fence Sitters are brain deader than the Mc. They talk rubbish to show Mc strong, cool and intersting, but in reality Mc is just that. Read with caution.
im reading this book and I feel like the reviews aren't accurate this book is very cliché mc seems to be a masochist also might be retarded I was really hoping for it to be good since love monster taming novels but this is bad tbh its not interesting feels like a cultivation novel without the excitement and a lot of retards including mc
This novel is acceptable till 100 chapters. After that the charecters become more dumb, foolish and brainless. They cant even see the very obvious things. Those are just one dimensional charects created to cover up the fact that the story is very lacking in the aspects of creativity and good plot. The MC becomes a very lazy idiot - here this author tried to imitate the "monster pet evolution" book but ended up creating a useless low IQ trash MC. If you want to read it because you like the first 80-90 chapter, i suggest you dont but You will be very dissapointed if you keep reading. I am saying it out of personal experience (i read the remaining chapters in raw)
I read until chapter 12 and I couldn't go over it, the characters are just annoying, like all of them, some of which, if were my irl friends, they would get a punch in the gut, like I can't say too much about it since I didn't even read half of the available chapters, but like with this first impression that I had access to, it's not that good of a read
The only thing good about this novel is the idea of the plot that's it as for oyher aspects read below. Main character -Is stupid. eg-He bought cure for his mother then forgot to give her. Story-Full of holes . eg- there are so many cultivators but none can judge others cultivation level its just you can fly yuo are a titled one. Other charecters-they try to act cunning but are forced by author act out the face slapping routine that to not properly. SO PLEASE AVOID READING IT UNLESS YOU ARE A AUTHOR WHO WANT'S TO LEARN HOW NOT TO WRITE A NOVEL
Concept of story is very good. But, the author don't know how to create scenario in the story. Most of the story was cliche and vey boring. The day after he gets system he becomes extremely arrogant that he puts no one in the eye. What can he do if someone hurts his family and starts to slow down his business. For finding 7th rank pet they lost another 7th rank pet, and they still obediently listened to MC and gone to go deep in the fracture space to search. Are they dumb or what. What if peak 9th Rank pet comes this time.
bad MC and very unlikely system. Couldn't get pass chapter 20 because of the FORCED PLOT that the author put in there. In one chapter he gives a customer a cold icy face for a pity reason being that she has a pet that he likes and he also ask for money from the customers just for a tip. I mean the concept is good but a good concept doesn't make a good story if the MC is terribly written with little to no character development.
