Xioani
Dear Author, your book is good. The progression of the story and characters is good, with potential. But having read the 79 chapters with grammatical error it quite disturb the organisation of thoughts which give us quite confussion what you're trying to deliver. But as I have said earlier, your story got potential. If you organize the thoughts more correctly by correcting the grammar I know for sure this story will sell more. So more power and God bless. Thank you.. I quite enjoyed reading Zinu and John story...