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All right, CodeW here. Your novel, so far, has potential. I know this is rarely updated now, but so far, I enjoy the plot about Vincent and his drive to find Commander Blair's real identity. However, there are some capitalization errors you can fix. Other than that, it's good. Hope that you can continue it. Sincerely, CodeW
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